John Lee is running to be MY congressman, so I have a vested interest in him doing well and picking up this seat from the incumbent Democrat.
Mr. Lee is not a client, but I decided to use his “About” page on his campaign website and run it through ChatGPT to see if we could improve on it. Let’s start with his bio as originally published…
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John Lee’s Record
- Pulled North Las Vegas out of a catastrophic fiscal hole and saved from State receivership. Cut the city’s long term budget deficit from $156 million in 2013 to now becoming the fiscally strongest city in Nevada without raising fees or taxes on his constituents! John was able to reduce sewer fees by 30% on city residents.
- Recruited multiple high-tech and Fortune 500 companies to relocate to NLV (Hyperloop One, Amazon, The Honest Company, Fanatics, Boxabl, Nuro, Air Liquide, Ball Corporation, Fresh and Lean, Tapestry, Bed, Bath and Beyond, Sephora, Evanesce.)
- Chose to recruit businesses to repair the City’s fiscal situation and created thousands of jobs.
- Cut the permitting process from six months to same day service.
- Revolutionized the building plan design process to shorten it from several months to over the counter in minutes.
Career History
- Mayor of North Las Vegas (July 2013- 2022)
- Member of the Nevada State Senate, District 1 (2004-2012)
- Member of the Nevada State Assembly, District 3 (1996-2002)
- Owner of Vegas Plumbing Service Inc. (1991-2016
- Owner of Champion tile & Marble (1995-2009)
Committees/Boards
- Boy Scouts of America Executive Board
- Civilian Military Council Executive Committee Member -Nellis AFB
- Clark County Regional Flood Control District Board of Directors
- Clark County Shooting Range Committee Chairman for 10 years
- Las Vegas Area Council Executive Committee – Boy Scouts
- Las Vegas Convention and Visitor’s Authority board of Directors
- Las Vegas Global Economic Alliance Board
- Mojave Southern Great Basin Resource Advisory Committee (BLM)
- Nevada First bank Founding Board Member
- North Vista Hospital Governing Board Member
- Regional Transportation Committee Member
- Southern Nevada Water Authority Board Member
- UNLV School of Medicine Community Advisory Board
- Enterprise Bank Board
During his 14 Years in the Legislature some Nevada Legislative Committees
Chairman of Government Affairs, Natural Resources, Agriculture and Mining, Infrastructure, commerce and Labor, Taxation
Community Memberships/Achievements
- Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints
- Eagle Scout, Silver Beaver Recipient & National Outstanding Eagle Scout – Boy Scouts of America
- Las Vegas Global Economic Association (LVGEA) Chairman’s Award Recipient -2019
- American City and County Magazine Nationwide Elected Official of the Year – 2016
- National Sports Shooting Foundation National Legislator of the Year – 2008
- National Rifle Association Legislator of the Year – 2008
- NFIB Guardian of Small Business -2000
- Started Southern Nevada Urban Micro Academy for city employee’s kids during COVID pandemic
John earned his living from working his businesses but made time to serve in the community and then in the Nevada Legislature. After each session he returned to work, and stayed in touch with his constituents and their needs. During his service John was on several committees learning about many Nevada issues. He began by serving on local committees and then on state legislative committees that included:
Parking and Traffic, Parks and Recreation, Southern Nevada Water Authority, Clark County Comprehensive Planning Board
Education/Degrees/Fields of Study
Nevada Master Plumber License
Life and Health Insurance License
Series 6 & 63 Securities License
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In my opinion, this reads too much like a résumé or job application – and even employers hate reading through such dry material.
And what waitress at Denny’s is going to understand – much less care about – what a “Series 6 & 63 Securities License” is, right? I mean, what relevance does that have to the average voter trying to decide who to vote for?
If there’s no readily recognized benefit to the reader, usually better to just leave it out.
Anyway, I dialed up ChatGPT to see if we could take this man’s impressive achievements and tell the story in a more reader-friendly way. I entered this request…
“Rewrite in a conversational narrative style with a heavy emphasis on how voters will benefit from Lee's experience.”
Here’s what the AI tool returned…
Meet John Lee, a seasoned leader with a track record that speaks volumes about his commitment to the people of North Las Vegas. Imagine a city pulled back from the brink of fiscal disaster, transformed into the strongest fiscal powerhouse in Nevada, and all of it without burdening its residents with increased fees or taxes. That's the result of John's dedication and expertise.
In his tenure as Mayor from 2013 to 2022, John not only slashed the city's long-term budget deficit from a staggering $156 million to zero but also orchestrated a remarkable 30% reduction in sewer fees for North Las Vegas residents. He didn't just stop there; he brought in high-tech giants and Fortune 500 companies like Hyperloop One, Amazon, The Honest Company, and more, creating thousands of jobs and revitalizing the city's economic landscape.
One of John's standout achievements is his swift action to streamline bureaucratic processes. The permitting process was cut from six months to same-day service, and the building plan design process was revolutionized from months to mere minutes, making North Las Vegas an attractive and efficient place for businesses to thrive.
But John's dedication to public service extends beyond his role as Mayor. His extensive career history includes serving in the Nevada State Senate and State Assembly, where he championed the interests of his constituents. Before his political career, he owned and managed successful businesses, proving his ability to balance entrepreneurial acumen with public service.
John's impact is not confined to politics alone; he's been a driving force in various committees and boards, from the Boy Scouts of America Executive Board to the Las Vegas Convention and Visitor’s Authority board of Directors. His involvement in the community spans across diverse sectors, including healthcare, education, and economic development.
A man of many accolades, John earned recognition as the Nationwide Elected Official of the Year by the American City and County Magazine in 2016, showcasing his effectiveness in local governance. His commitment to small businesses is evident in his recognition as the NFIB Guardian of Small Business in 2000.
Amidst all his achievements, John remains rooted in his community, earning awards like the Las Vegas Global Economic Association Chairman’s Award in 2019. Notably, during the COVID-19 pandemic, he initiated the Southern Nevada Urban Micro Academy to support city employees' children, demonstrating his compassion and innovative thinking.
John's journey from a successful businessman to a dedicated public servant is a testament to his multifaceted approach to community leadership. His involvement in various committees, coupled with his educational background in fields like plumbing and insurance, reflects a deep understanding of Nevada's diverse challenges.
In essence, voting for John Lee isn't just a vote for a seasoned politician; it's a vote for tangible, positive change. With his experience and commitment to the people, John is not just a leader; he's the driving force behind North Las Vegas's transformation into a thriving, fiscally robust community that benefits each and every resident.
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Now I ask you … which of the two is easier and better to read for the average voter?
Now, bear in mind, this is just a first draft. There are a few things in here I’d change.
For example, I’d rewrite “multifaceted approach to community leadership.” Regular folks don’t talk like that. And I’d change “seasoned politician” to “seasoned elected official.”
But overall, this 3-second re-write by ChatGPT saved a TON of time rather than me writing it from scratch. You should give it a whack.
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